Barren Landscape

Dune

Barren Landscape

The dark goes on forever, through your myopic lens. But you’re hiding in the shadows of a basin you created.

If only you would climb the hill and let the sunrise dazzle you.

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This is my submission for this weekend’s Trifextra challenge, in which we were asked to add exactly 30 of our own words to the following 3 words: myopic, dazzle, basin.

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Image credit: Sergey TokarevPhotoXpress.com

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28 thoughts on “Barren Landscape

  1. Ooh this resonates with me so much, Suzanne! Hiding in the shadows of a basin you created…really beautiful words here, all 33 of them.

    1. It’s easy to get stuck in those dark places of our own design. But so important to remember there is light somewhere. Thanks so much for your comment Valerie! 🙂

  2. Is it a writer-thing or a human-thing that makes crawling inside ourselves so easy to do and so difficult to undo? You have captured the essence of that struggle so deftly in this story. Good work, as usual. 🙂

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