Trifextra: Dalliance at Daybreak

Love

Dalliance at Daybreak

The morning air is cold and brisk
Fuelling steamy dreams of you.

Your heat caressing my chilly lips.

I quicken my pace
To be lost in your embrace,
My splendid cup of tea.

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This is my submission for this weekend’s Trifextra challenge, in which we had to use the literary version of an apostrophe in our 33-word piece.

Also, I wanted to remind you to check out the Speakeasy creative writing challenge. We’d love to see you there!

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Image credit: Corrie / PhotoXpress.com

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46 thoughts on “Trifextra: Dalliance at Daybreak

  1. Oh yes! Not a hot tea drinker, but I crave coffee when it’s cold. It’s just so comforting and you’ve captured the impatience of waiting for my drink to brew.

  2. Mmmm, yes, I see your point. Aside from the little surprise twist, I really like the sound and feel of that last line – there’s a languidness about it that feels like pillow talk. I am impressed. 🙂

  3. Love a twist like this…
    and even if my sip isn’t tea or coffee , I know how comforting it is to settle into a day instead of diving head first.

    Ahhhh. Steam, sip my friend.
    🙂

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